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minus-squareDrElementarylinkfedilink33•5 months agoIs anyone else bothered by the addition of the word “just”, which throws off the whole rhythm and doesn’t need to be there in any way?
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilink3•5 months agoIt works if you pronounce the last word as three syllables. I don’t know if that’s the correct way to pronounce it, but it is the American way to pronounce it.
minus-squareDrElementarylinkfedilink6•5 months ago“I’m a bitch” 3 syllables “I’m an orca” 4 syllables “Sinking yachts” 3 syllables “Off Majorca” 4 syllables Adding “Just” makes it 5, which is too many for the pattern
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilinkEnglish2•5 months agoAlso, “Imma hit you with my tail” is one syllable too many. “I’ll” would work better.
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilinkEnglish3•5 months agoIt’s awkward, especially since the “just” is completely unnecessary.
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilink2•5 months agoNaw, the line should only be 4 syllables. “I’m a mother” is the og.
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilink1•5 months agoI’d imagine whoever wrote this doesn’t know how to pronounce Majorca
Is anyone else bothered by the addition of the word “just”, which throws off the whole rhythm and doesn’t need to be there in any way?
It works if you pronounce the last word as three syllables. I don’t know if that’s the correct way to pronounce it, but it is the American way to pronounce it.
“I’m a bitch”
3 syllables
“I’m an orca”
4 syllables
“Sinking yachts”
3 syllables
“Off Majorca”
4 syllables
Adding “Just” makes it 5, which is too many for the pattern
Also, “Imma hit you with my tail” is one syllable too many. “I’ll” would work better.
5 works just fine.
It’s awkward, especially since the “just” is completely unnecessary.
Naw, the line should only be 4 syllables. “I’m a mother” is the og.
I’d imagine whoever wrote this doesn’t know how to pronounce Majorca
I know how that’s my favorite Zelda game
I smoked majorka’s ass once.
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