Hello, thank you for taking the time to meet with me. I wanted to share a few things for proper healthcare and get your guidance on my nutritional needs. On the psychiatric side, I have Bipolar disorder, fluctuating between types 1 and 2. I tend to stay in a hypomanic state, though it feels more...
Nope, looks good! That should give your doctor a good general overview.
The only note I have is that I’d replace the word “cum” with “semen”, that sounds a bit more professional.